First Draft Peer review 

Today was our peer review on our paper to the mayor on climate change and my classmates Tanya and Tiffany they both liked my paper on the summarizing and both said its very strong and i make a good point. they both say i should use more referrals to the book .Tanya showed me that i should use more direct quotes fact being i do not have any. Tiffany on the other must've spent i good 25-30 Min's exposing all my grammatical errors in my paper i didn't think there was a lot but boy did she find plenty.They were both very helpful in editing my paper,and i feel I'm on the right path to writing an A paper which I'm hoping to get because its English i have always gotten As.